What do you think of my Facebook landing tab?

[JakeThomas]

Hi all =)

I've recently just created a new Facebook landing page for my business, Emroy - Print & Design.

Was hoping to get some constructive feedback on what you think?

(For those already liking my page, you will jump directly to the wall. You will need to click on the "Welcome!" tab at the top to see it).

Click here to go to my page.

Thanks in advance,

- Jake @ Emroy Print

[bridiej]

It's great...

Fancy making me one....?

[MihadAli]

Hi Jake, love it but the "thank you" is all one word when it should be 2.

[bridiej]

Hi Jake, love it but the "thank you" is all one word when it should be 2.

Well spotted!

[MihadAli]

Well spotted!

Thanks hun. How have you been Bridie?

[JakeThomas]

Thanks for the lovely feedback & for finding the typo =)

Thank you, hehe.

- Jake

[MihadAli]

Thanks for the lovely feedback & for finding the typo =)

Thank you, hehe.

- Jake

Most welcome :-)

[Birgit]

Hi Jake,

I had a look a day or so ago and thinks it looks really nice & professional. Esp like the signature that looks hand written...

[MihadAli]

Hi Jake,

I had a look a day or so ago and thinks it looks really nice & professional. Esp like the signature that looks hand written...

Not sure what the font is called but there are many free fonts you can download for commercial uses that look like it was handwritten...might actually do that on mine.

[JakeThomas]

That font has got a very funny name actually, it's called "bitchcakes" ... Have absolutely no idea why, but it's great to use when you want a handwritten look.

It can be downloaded here. When using it, I tend to increase the character spacing as it gives it a slightly more handwritten look.

- Jake