What do you think of this tagline?

[JakeThomas]

I will be doing another mail out in the coming weeks (scheduled them monthly) and I've been working on witty taglines to go out with each one.

The last "We don't sell printing; we sell first impressions" was quite well received.

The second one I got the idea from an advertisement I saw for another printer on the side of a bus. It read "We're Australia's #1 commercial printer".

So I was thinking of using the following...

"We're NOT Australia's #1 printer; but thats why we work harder for you".

What do you think?

- Jake

[Chris Bates]

I don't like it. More negative than positive to me. I think with work you could make it work, but as it stands it doesn't portray much value.

[v2Media]

That would only work if the reader has the "We're Australia's #1 commercial printer" in recent memory, else Chris is right, it sounds like your putting yourself down.

[v2Media]

FYI - there is no "#1" in any business, it's a purely egotistical thing to put out there; tantamount to mental masturbation. #1 for what?

[BusiMum]

Our quality is more than just the paper we use. (needs work but you see where I'm coming from)

[JakeThomas]

Fiona... Oooh, I'm liking that one =) Thanks.

[BusiMum]

How about this....
Choose EMROY for

Every
Marketing
Requirement
Of
Yours

Too quirky?

[JakeThomas]

Oooh, we're on a roll now! Although, it's a little more than marketing material... But maybe for a niche campaign... hmm.

[Burgo]

Why are you wasting your time looking for #1 when you have Emroy

Emroy is not Just a Printer, we offer more.

[Burgo]

Hahahaha sucked in again.......................
Should have called Emroy